Thumb Nailing on A3s

Thumb nailing in a 5 section continuous narrative format. (I coloured Slidfrosk green so he's easy to find). I have always struggled with composition so I'll need to get feedback from fellow students and tutors. 

I'm not sure if changing the camera views drastically effects the composition or if its a bad idea to do. In traditional continuous narratives the angles were all over the place but that meant the perspective was completely wrong and very warped. 

 I'll keep thumb nailing on these A3 print outs and I'll narrow down a few compositions I like and them draw them up to scale to see if they work. I'll present my final composition at interim.